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Tuesday, May 17, 2005

spring morning

spring morning
the florist raises
the steel shutter

3 Comments:

Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

At one of those typical manhattan street shops, with the pull-down steel shutters?

7:29 PM  
Blogger floots said...

I love Spring poems - all the way back to:
Whan that Aprill with his shoures soote
The droghte of March hath perced to the roote ...
- but as a spring metaphor, and a poem in its own right, this one of yours has to be close to the top of the heap.

12:41 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

ap: Yes, that's the image I had in mind.
Floots: Your praise will keep me in a good mood for days.

3:45 PM  

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