haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Thursday, October 20, 2005

cityscape

towers of cloud

in the autumn rain

floots said...: towers of cloud is a great image. It showed me the clouds but also the urban skyline - emphasising its ephemeral quality and, perhaps the way in which the works/existence of man are subjugated by the weather, the seasons.; 10:28 PM
Bill said...: Great reading, Floots. The toughest part of writing this was getting the first line right. Your comment about the skyline is just what I was going for, and that I was afraid I couldn't get.; 11:48 AM
baseball gods said...: Bill,

Beautiful! I agree that the skyline suggestion makes this work really well. And thanks for adding my blog to your links section. I'll return the favor.

Kami; 2:37 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Kami. For some reason, this one means a lot to me personally, and I'm delighted that it works for you.; 5:43 PM
Anonymous Poet said...: Wonderful. Evocative.; 7:12 PM