haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Wednesday, October 05, 2005

she loves the ring

his surreptitious glance

at the price tag

floots said...: a gem
carat on a stick
multi-faceted

- bad puns: take your pick. I got a million of 'em. This is a lovely moment. I wonder where you saw it, or is it purely fictional?
(Enjoyed the previous post too.)
Cheers; 6:20 AM
Bill said...: Floots: I've taken a few surreptitious glances in my time, but the senryu is not based on a specific experience. Thanks for your comment.; 7:28 AM
Patry Francis said...: Oh, this is a sly one. I think we're seeing another facet of Bill. I like it.; 8:13 PM
Bill said...: Thanks for your response, Patry. Another facet or two couldn't hurt.; 9:01 PM