cafe
waiting for you
at the sidewalk cafe
half moon
posted by Bill | 2:50 PM
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12 Comments:
this is a sparkling sixgun of a piece
didn't even see you draw
but it hits the spot
romantic
evocative
naturalistic
(I know I've said it before, but I bet youknew this one was right as soon as you finished it.
(thanks for the visit)
Right, floots. This one felt good all the way, and I've received a lot of positive feedback on it.
This one has stayed with me. It's somehow hesitant and hopeful. And thanks for the wonderful comment on my haiku set. Kami.
Thanks, Kami. I love the way you've articulated the tone. And your blog is first-rate.
Who's the special someone?
BTW, thank you for adding me to your blogroll. That is a very nice compliment!
Anon: For me, the woman always worth waiting for is my wife Pat, but the poem is open as to who's who. And you're welcome re: your blog, to which, as you know, I'm a frequent visitor.
What a nice image/moment.
Thanks, Kara
Bill: re your comment that this poem has a particular meaning for you, but is open to any one else reading, that is the same approach I took with "Defiant." That way, a reader can relate his/her own experiences or feelings to the text of the poem.
I think all of your haiku is great. Possibly you'd post some of it in my poetry forum at
http://poetry-and-prose.activeboard.com/
I have a special section for Haiku.
Keith: Thanks for the comment and the invitation.
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