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Friday, June 02, 2006

losing

fog moves in
Manhattan skyline
losing its edge

9 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Mist creeps in
Manhattan skyline;
subway screeds.

;-)

10:02 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Aha!

8:17 PM  
Blogger Masago said...

Nice one.

8:23 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Tried to send a privat email for bill, but don't have the address?
My message:
I translated Bill's poem (Manhattan skyline) into Finnish and put it into my pages:
http://www.saunalahti.fi/~juhatik/eksynyt/juni03.htm
Bill: are u angry? Copyright is yours, in every language!

Tikkis

3:55 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

tikkis: Angry, not at all. Thanks for letting me know. I'll go over there as soon as I finish here.

Thanks, anonymous and Vaughn.

12:08 PM  
Blogger polona said...

well done!

2:10 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, polona

7:31 PM  
Blogger floots said...

to a poor englishman such as myself
this has a wonderful mythic quality

10:48 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

thanks floots. New York is a nice place to visit.

5:57 PM  

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