haiku-usa: flies of summer

Sunday, December 10, 2006

flies of summer

you might live longer

if you'd stop buzzing

I wrote this, or a version of it, a couple of summers ago. It's been gathering dust ever since, but "buzz" reminded me of it, so I thought I'd trot it out.

10 Comments:

Pat Paulk said...: You point out a very ggod point. But, some "creatures" are too proud of their noise to know when to stop!! Love it!!; 3:37 PM
Unknown said...: I absolutely love this one Bill.; 6:28 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, pat and collin. Yeah, I guess I'm telling flies they should stop being flies.; 8:33 PM
floots said...: a definite message for us all
(but some days we just gotta buzz) :)
thanks bill; 10:21 PM
Masago said...: So true.; 6:21 AM
polona said...: i think this conveys a universal message. love it!; 11:15 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, floots, vaughn, and polona. You know what they [used to?] say in Hollywood: If you want to send a message, call Western Union.; 4:28 AM
Anonymous said...: Nicely done, Bill.; 10:20 AM
Tikkis said...: - A short set of buzzing, by Bill. Fascinating!

If I am buzzing
I'm still living
strong!; 1:26 AM
Bill said...: Well said, tikkis. Thanks.; 12:26 PM

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Sunday, December 10, 2006

flies of summer

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