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A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Friday, December 28, 2007

wintry mix

sprinkling parmesan

over the stew

[Shiki Monthly Kukai, December 2007]

The Site Administrator said...: Delicious!; 4:40 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Richard.; 7:57 PM
Pat Paulk said...: Love the cheese, but the wintry mix doesn't blend well with these southern bones.; 7:27 AM
Bill said...: Not our favorite mix up here, either, Pat. Stew helps.; 10:32 AM
Inside our hands, outside our hearts said...: Okay Bill, now I love this one...It combines the need for warm filling food and winter. Both can be quite inviting if served with the right temptation.

T; 5:21 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, T, for that responsive reading.; 3:31 PM
Anonymous said...: Hi Bill,
Of all the current free-format poems, this was my favorite. I thought the flow, meter, juxtaposition, and imagery were excellent. It seems to warm you up inside to read it :-); 7:25 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, geo, for that thoughtful and sensitive reading.; 8:02 AM