haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Wednesday, January 30, 2008

the driver

whistling softly

josh said...: Lotsa space left to fill in our own story. I'm getting an end-of-shift light-heartedness.

Nice one, Bill.; 4:09 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Josh. Yes, the ku is as open to interpretation as the moment was.; 9:17 PM
floots said...: thoughts on mortality for me
but
suprisingly pleasant ones
to whistle gently into that good night
(as dylan thomas almost said) :)
is not a bad idea
thanks bill; 6:54 AM
polona said...: i like the way it can take me in different directions (literally and metaphorically), too; 12:04 PM
Bill said...: A sensitive and imaginative reading, floots.

Yes, polona,I'm seeing that in the responses I'm getting here and elsewhere.

Thanks, both.; 8:02 PM