haiku-usa: the space between

Tuesday, March 04, 2008

the space between

her skirt and her boot tops

winter wind

(For Josh)

12 Comments:

josh said...: shallow spring
the space between
her heel clicks

;); 11:01 AM
polona said...: a variable, it seems :); 11:09 AM
Bill said...: Josh and polona, endless possibilities.; 4:33 PM
Masago said...: I can almost feel the chill.; 6:29 PM
floots said...: i can see this so clearly - perhaps i need some counselling :); 8:05 AM
Bill said...: Well, Vaughn and floots, this seems tobe doing what it's supposed to.

By the way, this one got started when my friend Josh (see the first comment) owned up to a prejudice agianst haiku that include the phrase "the space between."; 12:16 PM
Crafty Green Poet said...: I can feel the wind in that one...; 6:33 AM
Masago said...: Space between,
hadn't thought it's use --
now I must. :-); 5:33 PM
Bill said...: I could feel the wind when I saw it, Juliet.

Vaughn, "the space between" has become an earworm. I'm constantly playing with it in my mind. And it's all Josh's fault.; 6:29 PM
Masago said...: ...and I suppose we can also feel the time-space between, like the time between posting and replying.; 4:56 PM
Anonymous said...: spring wind
the space between
two comments

spring wind
I clear my throat
between comments

I suppose the length of the skirt doesn't (have to) matter here, although I do find it an interesting point.

:>) Ella; 5:15 AM
Bill said...: Yes we can, Vaughn.

Right, Ella, it doesn't (have to) matter, but I remain in awe of the courage of women.

the space between
my invitation
and her acceptance; 2:03 PM

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Tuesday, March 04, 2008

the space between

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