letter
her letter . . .
between the lines
there's nothing
(First published in Simply Haiku)
posted by Bill | 9:49 PM
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17 Comments:
love it bill
john
this is excellent,
I too... have recieved this letter. _m
this one says so much between the lines...
John, Juliet, magyar, and polona, your comments are muh appreciated.
Awww...
this one is brilliant! my kind of haiku!
a plain talk kind of letter, enjoyed this one
much love
gillena
The lawyer
signed away --
a hung jury
Ps. I am not a lawyer and perhaps that is not possible?
But your's I liked. Again.
Vaughn, andrew, gillena, tikkis, thanks for the comments. tikkis, I'm not sure what "signed away" means.
It's very nice I like it a lot, well done!!
Thanks for the visit and comment, Nick.
I wrote my comment and then I saw that Polona wrote nearly the same
"...so much between the lines..."
Mmmm. This is one to sit with a while. Is it comforting or sad or disappointing or reassuring? or all of those things? Great one. So enormous for being so small.
I think I'm sorry there wasn't.
Oh, checked my notes, and found sign away from a law-dictionary, better perhaps to give in or to give up ?
Also hand over could be one idea...
All these variations sounded so good to me, but what is the strict meaning of the writer, that's a Q!
Thanks for the comments, angelika, jem, and pat. Ah, tikkis, lawyere language!
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