haiku-usa: shiver

Wednesday, November 19, 2008

a shiver

in the fallen leaves

passing cloud

[First published in Ambrosia]

Crafty Green Poet said...: excellent, very evocative; 11:40 PM
John McDonald said...: good one Bill
john; 1:01 AM
gautami tripathy said...: It was kind of cold in the morning today..; 5:46 AM
Gillena Cox said...: nice one Bill

much love
gillena; 8:58 AM
Magyar said...: Chillingly applicable... ! _m; 1:14 PM
Devika Jyothi said...: very shivery!
evocative..

wishes!
devika; 6:50 AM
josh said...: sea surface blues::all the passing clouds

hope you & pat are warm, well & have a great thanksgiving...; 10:25 AM
polona said...: ohh... excellent; 11:22 AM
Bill said...: Juliet, John, gautami, Gillena, Magyar, Devika, Josh, and polona, your comments are much appreciated.; 2:56 PM
J. Andrew Lockhart said...: I like it!; 8:03 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Andrew.; 7:49 PM
Devika Jyothi said...: came to see if there are new ones, Bill :)

come again later..

wishes!
devika; 7:56 PM
Bill said...: Devika, I must have been posting the new one while you were posting your message. Drop in any time.; 7:58 PM
jem said...: I read this as some kind of flicker of recognition between old friends.; 2:02 AM
Bill said...: Thanks for the comment, Jem.; 5:49 AM

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