singles
singles bar
she tells him she always
picks losers
[First published in Prune Juice]
posted by Bill | 7:02 AM
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19 Comments:
Made me smile,
she could a loser herself!? :)
wishes,
devika
Well, Devika, I trust she just lost him. But some guys are desperate.
Dear Bill, there you will have to ask her only...
i can't even make a guess of women in bars, nonetheless in singles bar! :)
wishes
devika
Interesting way to put it..
Thanks, Gautami.
_By she... the un-said, "don't pick me."
_So many ways to go here, Bill, interesting.
_m
enjoyed this Bill (thanks for the link info)
john
ouch... but great stuff.
this one can go in many directions
I like it. Made me smile. I wonder if there could be a haiku of his response?
Brilliant!
I've been there! :)
I invite everyone to take up the challenge laid down by Jem: a haiku/senryu on the guy's response.
(Andrew, it sounds as though you would be well qualified.)
Thanks for the comments.
I don't think that I am too qualified that being a guy's response...
and I can't write a haiku on that...
but being a woman who tend to choose losers, I think i'll talk a bit of my experience dealing with many losers...
One guy -- the most demanding of the lot i met -- said he should be the last that I pick..and he's the one i'm married to...and we still are in it :)
But that day, I took a word from him that I would go out of bounds, but would wish to give mindful companionship to any -- man, woman, boy, girl of any age --- in case I feel someone needs it....
and there he agreed wholeheartedly....saying that was what he liked about me :)
so thats it :)
wishes,
devika
btw, my husband wasn't a loser for women..but for many other reason at that time :)
devika
hey mistake there...
I took a word from him that I would NOT go out of bounds, but would wish to give mindful....
MISSING A WORD makes so much of difference :)
wishes,
devika
Especially when the word is "not," Devika. Your husband sounds like a good one.
Very right, Bill :)
My husband -- Ofcourse he is --- he is both my strength and weakness! :)
wishes,
devika
- singles bar? Those bars i visited when i was younger were ... Hssssh...
Ah, tikkis, the days of our misspent youth. Wouldn't we like to misspend them again?
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