haiku-usa: snowflakes

Sunday, February 15, 2009

a sidewalk vendor

scrapes his griddle

[First published in White Lotus]

Devika Jyothi said...: Good one, Bill

wishes,
devika; 7:51 AM
John McDonald said...: enjoyed Bill
john; 3:18 PM
Masago said...: Ha! Very good.; 5:08 PM
Magyar said...: Nice... did I see this somewhere else, other that White Lotus_?

With apologies, some self-promo... magyar-haiku.blogspot.com; 8:20 PM
jem said...: Great contrast of hot and cold. And very atmospheric, not the sort of scene I'd encounter here, therefore all the more pleasing to read.; 4:58 AM
Gillena Cox said...: nice one bill

much love
gillena; 5:25 AM
gautami tripathy said...: Like the contrast here..; 8:17 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Devika, John, and Vaughn. Magyar, I posted a draft of this in a workshop setting; don't know if you could have seen it there. It's also always possible that someone else has worked with a similar image. Thanks for the information about your site. Thanks, jem: it's a familiar New York street scene. And thanks to gillena and Gautami.; 9:12 AM
polona said...: love the sentiment in this one.; 10:49 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, polona.; 8:34 PM
Anonymous said...: humble hut~
the guardian fangs
of icicles; 12:51 AM
Tikkis said...: A thirsty child
eating
white snowflakes; 3:01 AM
Bill said...: Well, tikkis, I'm glad they're white.; 8:51 PM

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