haiku-usa: fourth

Saturday, July 04, 2009

Fourth of July

a teenager crosses

against the light

[I wish all my friends a glorious fourth. The fourth of July may not be a holiday where you are, but I hope it's glorious, anyway.]

Karol Rosiak said...: Hallo, Bill,

Good haiku.
Good words for friends.
Thank you.

- Karol; 2:37 PM
Karol Rosiak said...: Ps.

czwarty lipca
Bill z U.S.A. pozdrawia
wszystkich

http://karolaha.blogspot.com/; 2:50 PM
Devika Jyothi said...: Happy Independence Day, Bill :)

Nice haiku,

wishes,
devika; 8:30 PM
Tikkis said...: rebelling youngster
making hos own decisions --
he owns the empty streets

Too many words, but this is not supposed to be a poem but a short comment!

Happy independent day!; 3:34 AM
Gillena Cox said...: a show of freedom; no doubt; hope you had a happy holiday

much love
gillena; 8:28 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Karol. I'll ask my Polish daughter-in-law to translate the PS.

Thanks, Devika, Tikkis, and Gillena.; 5:52 PM
jem said...: A great take on the notion of independence. We all have to spot it whereever we can. It means something to everyone, American or otherwise.; 4:41 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, jem. Good to hear from you.; 4:03 PM

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