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Tuesday, August 25, 2009

mountains

mountains reflected
in shining waters
I look for a rhyme

(This is a wet-ink posting. I just wrote this as a reflection on a tanka at Kristin Riggs's blog, which you can access by clicking on "kristin riggs" to the left.)

9 Comments:

Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

Me too :)
nice one Bill,

wishes,
devika

7:30 PM  
Blogger Juhani Tikkanen said...

listening
readywrote rhymes --
untouched papery waters

Just wrote this, wondering whether this is a hay(na)ku, or what.

Anyway, yours good posting and visited also kristin riggs.

6:56 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

I guess we all are, Devika.

I wonder, tikkis. Thanks.

12:34 PM  
Blogger haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert) said...

Nice!

And I learned a new expression: wet ink posting! smile

12:41 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Angelika.

1:38 PM  
Blogger Emma Dalloway said...

fountains?

4:54 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Any shining water will do, dalloway.

9:38 AM  
Blogger Emma Dalloway said...

but only one that rhymes with mountains :)

4:04 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

By George, I think she's got it!

2:30 PM  

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