private
private beach
a seagull
rides the swells
[First published in White Lotus]
posted by Bill | 2:44 PM
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10 Comments:
I guess no beach is ever completely private. I feel that way about my backyard sanctuary...just when I think I'm alone, the crickets and frogs quickly tell me otherwise. :)
Lovely poem!!!
It's hard to find a beach where only gulls are and no people. A lovely image of peace and beauty.
Adelaide
a free ride, or with toll...seems a fine place :)
wishes,
devika
nice movement Bill
john
I like the tranquility it brought into my mind..
Thanks, my friends.
I like it as it is, Bill!
_Too, I can read this with colloquial definitions, and gain a different perspective. Interesting! _m
Ah, Doug, I'm glad you picked up the colloquial implications of "rides the swells." That's definitely intentional.
I modified this from my notebook:
Watching
silent lake --
A gull: - SQUEEEeee!
(Sound from WikiAnswer.com.)
That sounds about right, tikkis.
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