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Saturday, April 17, 2010

lights

bridge lights in fog
where I'm going
where I've been

7 Comments:

Blogger John McDonald said...

caught the confusion well Bill
john

1:26 AM  
Blogger Ralf Bröker said...

The thing we did are the thing we do. And who knows what comes next ... The double I is fantastic here, Bill.

Best wishes
Ralf

4:06 PM  
Blogger Magyar said...

__That last hazy step between where you were... and where you are to be, and this haziness indicates, to my lazy perception, a concern in taking that step; trepidation.
__Nicely posed! _m

7:34 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

Spending quite a lot time with this!

Volcanic ash is now ebbing away today for a while here, but a new cloud approaching from Iceland...

But this foggy bridge :-(

the fog
straddling over the bridge --
I'm ebbing away

12:45 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

This was intended as a mood piece, and it seems you've caught the mood. And, tikkis, ebbing is what we're all doing. In fact, I'll post one on this theme (wrote it a few days ago).

9:23 AM  
Anonymous Jingle said...

awesome Haiku!

2:15 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Ji. A pleasure to meet you.

8:08 AM  

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