anesthesia
anesthesia
wearing off
steady rain
first published in Notes from the Gean
posted by Bill | 11:47 AM
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6 Comments:
a nice pivot line, Bill.
Adelaide
interesting... intriguing !
Bill, effective jux. Your use of "steady" adds more weight to the poem.
Nicely done.
Chen-ou
nice juxtaposition; heightens that quiet struggle of awakening
you were surely missed at Lunch Break 12 Days of Christmas celebration
Best Wishes for a happy and as well very creative 2012
much love
thanks, guys.
A lovely poem! I particularly like the phenomenological aspects: the cold rain coming down as the anesthesia wears off, suddenly feeling the drops... Makes me think of walking home after a dentist appointment...
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