haiku-usa: wind

Friday, January 31, 2014

winter wind at the window my ghost

Shiki Kukai, January 2014; assigned topic: wind

WordsPoeticallyWorth said...: An interesting piece that I enjoyed reading.

Thank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.; 1:27 PM
Magyar said...: __A breath in this cold wind; I wipe my glasses.

__I see your "condensation," that unseen vapor collecting to a ghostly fog.

__Nice, Bill. _m; 7:55 PM
John McDonald said...: nice sets here Bill
john; 12:33 AM
Danièle Duteil said...: Heaven! He may fly.; 3:06 AM
Crafty Green Poet said...: haunting words; 5:37 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, my friends. I rarely do one-liners, but the form seemed right this time. It's fun to see what readers make of this.; 7:15 PM
Tikkis said...: How to read a short poem

winter wind
paying a visit
a ghost

:-); 12:58 AM
Rita Odeh said...: Nice one, Bill.; 10:11 AM
Dave Serjeant said...: I love this one. Can really relate to it.; 5:58 PM
Gina said...: very nice ... love the one line format - so very effective. seeing ourself suddenly is always startling; more so in a ghostly suggestion ... >>> Gina; 4:55 PM
Bill said...: Rita, tikkis, Dave, and Gina, belated but heartfelt thanks.

Dave, welcome to the site.

Gina, I've missed you. Great to hear from you.; 12:10 PM

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