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Saturday, March 21, 2015

brightening

brightening sky
after the eclipse
a skylark's song

I posted this as a response at Juliet's blog. In fact, it is directly inspired (some might say stolen) from Juliet's post on the recent solar eclipse

5 Comments:

Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

lovely ku, thanks Bill

11:37 AM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

The eclipse must have been quite a marvel to see.

A love haiku.

Adelaide

2:52 PM  
Blogger Iris said...

this is real spring, Bill
Have a sunny days :) Iris

10:05 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

"after the eclipse"
__A phrase... that here seems to open Spring's gateway. Nice Bill.
_m

7:19 PM  
Blogger Frank... said...

It was too cloudy here to see the eclipse. Nice haiku, Bill - great last line!...

12:05 PM  

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